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Wednesday, November 17, 2021

Courage poster

In class, we are learning about courage. we had to choose a quote that we like and create a motivational poster about it. I like this quote because courage can help in life and you'll never fail.

Thursday, November 4, 2021

My goals

In class, we have been learning how to use boys sentences and 2a sentences and other words.overflow-wrap: break-word; overflow: hidden; padding:



My Writing Goals 


Not yet

Developing

Got it! 


My story flows and I use punctuation for effect 

I have an interesting hook

I have good organisation (paragraphs help reader with the orientation, problem, complication, solution)

I have used , . ?!  correctly within direct speech

I have short sentences for impact and longer sentences to build detail

I have used wow words (verbs, adjectives, nouns)

I have figurative language ( simile, metaphor, idiom personification)

I mostly use show not tell 

I have a wide variety of  sentence starters

I have a 2A, double ly; de;de;  simile; verb, person sentence; 3 ed; emotion word, sentence; P.C sentence. ( comment on them)

I can give, and respond to, peer and teacher feedback to improve my work and my friend’s. 

My writing goals are...

Putting more 2a sentences and using punctuation in my writing and putting in verbs, nouns, adjectives.