creative writting

 Name:Mikaere                                    

What I want my writing to have 

Success Criteria

Good verbs

Full stops 

Punctuation

Good grammar

Verbs 

Commas  

Nouns 

  DIRT BIKING 

Guide writing

Hook

“Watch out,”.i shouted Me and my cousin nearly crashed into my dad's car.  My Nephew in auckland   said “watch you nearly hit me”, my cousin just Missed the bumper of the car so i revved the dirt bike to much which made the front wheel  lift when I Revved it and my cousin CRASHED, in the bush. I laughed because the brakes Didn't work.  my cousin got out of the bush,  he said “ ahh that was sore as”.  My dad fixed the bike and we started to do some more skids. My dirt bike was black and red,the make is  250 sx.  The smell of my bike when I drift it smelled like gas.  

                                                               Event 1

And I heard my cousin yell because he nearly crashed into me. then I yelled “bruh watch out” I shouted and me and my cousin went for a  quick ride around. my cousin went to try a wheelie and he fall of the bike and I laughed. he whispered “ eh shhh”. And so we went back to the house and my cousin's dirt bike stopped and I told him to hop off because he didn't know how to start the dirt bike so I started the dirt bike for him and we went back to the house.    

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